On the Job Writing

Wednesday, 19 March 2014

The dog sits like a statue on the lonely, golden sand of the beach, breathing slowly. As the sun sets,

the waves start crashing louder than they were before, making a beautiful whooshing sound.

ethan20 March 2014 at 09:29
good ollie
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Anonymous20 March 2014 at 21:03
The words used made me feel very relaxed and I almost felt as though I was there and could hear the waves. Great writing! Mrs Friend
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